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Ch9 The Bolt That Cleared The MistChapter 9
The Bolt That Cleared The Mist

“Are you ready for this Bolt?”
Commander Bolt tried to keep his focus on Commander Orem but his head still felt a little dizzy, “Cut the chatter and just begin already, I’ve got better things to do than deal with a griffon who has an attitude problem.”
Commander Orem laughed, “Well if you want to face me you might need a weapon first.”
Commander Bolt replied, “I don’t need one to take you on, besides, it’s being repaired right now, but just to be ready…”
Commander Bolt looked off to the side where Captain Drib was standing. “Captain Drib! There is a spear in the corner of my quarters, please go get it, but don’t give it to me until I ask for i

Ch7 Peace in Death, Love in War, and Good in EvilChapter 7
Peace in Death, Love in War, and Good in Evil

“Commander Bolt, its Captain Stone. Permission to enter your quarters, sir?”
Commander Bolt dunked his sharpening stone into a bowl of water then answered. “Granted.”
Captain Stone entered the hut, “Commander I came to report that Lieutenant Snow has just left with the Prisoners to the main prison on the center of the Everfree Forest.”
Commander Bolt continued sharpening the blade on his shield and replied, “Thank you for the report, how are the wounded?”
Captain Stone lowered her head, “Of the total we had earlier, six more died an hour ago, three will die within the next few hours, and its estimated ten more will be lost before tomorrow morning.”
Comman

Ch16 The Emotions of WarChapter 16
The Emotions of War

“YOUR MAJESTY! The Nightmare Legion, they…”
“I know, they broke through the western wall and are making their way through the city.”
Princess Celestia sighed in worry as she looked at the destroyed wall from the tower balcony, “Please commander, don’t make me do this. I don’t want to use them, not on you… not on Luna.”
The Celestial Commander stepped forward to try to understand her mumbling, “Your majesty?”
Princess Celestia replied, “It’s nothing, gather your forces on the main road and attack the advancing enemy in the city. Also, have the catapult teams abandon their posts. The enemies are no longer in front of us; they are on top of us. After that I want you to go home and get your family, I don’t want to leave them in harm’s w

Ch17 True PainChapter 17
True Pain
Princess Celestia stood and watched as the castle gate crumbled and General Roza and her troops stormed the front castle garden. Princess Celestia turned to her guard and spoke, “Line your archers at the castle doors. If the enemy soldiers break through then fire on them.”
“YOUR MAJESTY!!! LOOK OUT!!!”
At that moment Commander Orem landed on the edge of the balcony and smiled, “You must be the pony princess that I’ve heard so much about. Are you willing to surrender, or should I kill you now?”
Princess Celestia glared at the intimidating griffon and replied, “You have some nerve to threaten me so lightly, why is the griffon king supporting the Nightmare Legion?”
“Beats me, his majesty said something about, helping the

Ch14 Who I AmChapter 14
Who I Am

“Commander… Commander?... COMMANDER!?!”
Commander Bolt snapped out of it and replied, “Oh! Uh... Yea, Mr. Mayor what is it?”
The mayor repeated himself, while holding a piece of paper, “I was just asking you, do you agree with these numbers?”
Commander Bolt took the sheet of paper and looked over it, then he looked at the shop owner, “This seems a little low, you have to take in account that each usable weapon has been refurbished by Hooviet Union blacksmiths. Don’t you think you should add an extra three thousand bits?”
The shop owner laughed, “Well commander, it looks like you got a keen eye. I figured since you look like you got a lot on your mind, that you wouldn’t catch it.”
Commander Bolt smiled, “I may be a stallion of war, but I know when fair is fa

Ch13 Past Wounds in Present SkiesChapter 13
Past Wounds in Present Skies

Empty, the streets didn’t have a single soul on them. Commander Bolt continued trotting down the street as if nothing was wrong. However, Commander Orem and Captain Drib felt uneasy about walking an empty street of a usually crowded city, while Captain Stone felt uneasy about being in Cloudsdale in general. Commander Orem taped Commander Bolt’s armor. “Is this a normal way for pegasi to greet griffon?”
Commander Bolt shook his head, “No, but this is a normal way for pegasi to greet soldiers who fought a battle just below their homes. To be honest, I expected them to greet us a little differently.”
Captain Drib looked at Commander Bolt, “Reall

The Difference Ch3Chapter 3
The Clan

“Are you sure this is a good idea? I don’t want you to get hurt.”
Star Bolt looked back at Gem while they continued flying, “I'll be fine Gem, what worries me is why you’re coming with me. You have been sick the past week and I don’t think you should be out in your condition. By the way, what did the doctor tell you this morning?”
Gem shook her head, “I'm fine Star, he just said it was the stomach flu. There isn’t anything to worry about.”
Star Bolt looked forward and continued as they flew, “I just don’t want you to risk yourself, this sort of thing can be dangerous, I am meeting with dragons after all.”
Gem sighed, “Star I'm not a

Ch22 A New DawnChapter 22
A New Dawn
Stars, that’s what he saw when he opened his eyes, Star Bolt looked into the sky as he laid on his back in a field. He noticed the pain on his shoulder was gone so he immediately assumed he was dead. He continued looking at the sky and mumbled to himself, “I… I'm responsible. It was me, I started this war, I brought the eclipse upon everypony. It’s my fault; they all died because of me, because I couldn’t see that, the mare I loved wasn’t the one giving me orders, she was the one taking my orders all along. I deserve this; I deserve to die withou…”
Star Bolt went silent when he felt somepony’s hoof slowly grip his, “Don’t talk like that commander, you know as well as I do, that you only did what you saw was the right choice. Even if it caused this much trouble, you fought to the bitte

Tears Of A Fallen Star Ch1 Chapter 1
The Colt Wakes and Names Himself
Wind… that was the first sound he heard, the young colt opened his eyes but he was too weak to move. With his eyes open, he could see many stars above him, that’s when he realized he was lying on his back. Out the corner of his eye, he could see a blue mane, he was very weak so he struggled to move his head to see who that mane belonged to, it was a tall beautiful mare.
The mare noticed that he had woken up so she smiled at him and asked “Are you ok little colt?”
The young colt could only nod his head yes, he was still too weak to talk. The mare smiled and spoke again, “Congratulations my little pony, you just earned your cutie mark. You now know your special talent.”
The young colt looked at the mark that had recently appe

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Noon, the eclipse just reached the center of the sky and Celestia stood at the center of the battle field with her fifty troops waiting for Commander Bolt’s next move. Commander Bolt stood at the top of the hill with his officers looking down into the battle field with disappointment. He was hoping that they would have left during the night but now he had no choice but to fight. A phoenix flew from Princess Celestia and landed in front of him, “Ah Philomena It’s been a while, do you have a message from Princess Celestia?”
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