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Gathering Thoughts

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This is my first Comic, it’s not the best but I thought it up at work so I had to create it. I hope you like it.
PS there is a surprise hidden in this comic that I just HAD to put in, any brony will find her without a problem. Enjoy!


The surprise is by: bluedragonhans [link] & blond-justice [link]

Luna images by: mkovic [link] godvsdem0n [link] misterlolrus [link] & blackm3sh [link]

Twilight images by: pikamander2 [link] & stickthefigure [link]

Celestia image by nickman983 [link] & mihaaaa [link]

Background and MLP:FIM by Hasbro
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1678x6841px 5.92 MB
© 2012 - 2024 Priceless911
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

As <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/r/i/r…" alt=":iconrivuredevour:" title="RivuRedevour"/> said in his critique [pretty good beng its second one] It has some minor errors in the vectors, "forgiveable" cause they're not yours[next time better use the ones on MLP Vector Club, just a suggestion], but the dialogue it's pretty funny. And being your first comic:
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/u/d…" alt=":icondumbledoreplz:" title="dumbledoreplz"/><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/a/s…" alt=":iconsaysplz:" title="saysplz"/>5 points to griffindor!
Oh and it would be great if you make another comic with "what would she do with 2 thousand years"
-Learn to draw and make your own comics without vectors to get what you want. "If you want it to be good, do it yourself". This one is good, but it could be better you know.
P.S.: I didn't pretend to rate the "Technique" part since the art isn't yours, but i'm not saying it isn't good.