|Gathering of My OC Star Bolt, His Story, and a few of his Officers, plus some comics. and a few requests. enjoy|
A Charred Stone Ch7Chapter 7A Charred Stone Ch7 by Priceless911
Sweat rolled down my face as I strained to hold the two buckets of water at shoulder height without bending either of my front hooves. It was difficult especially doing so while balanced on my hind hooves, but through it all, I continued holding them straight out as Captain Storm trotted around me and spoke, “you have five archers in your squad, one is hit with an arrow while the rest look to you for guidance… what do you do?”
Straining to hold the buckets up I replied, “t-two archers… see to the wounded… the rest continue firing volleys.”
Captain Storm nodded his head as he continued, “in the same scenario… Swish! An arrow hits on of your helping archers in the head!... what do you do!”
Straining even more I replied, “Remaining helper, continue seeing to the first wounded!... the second he
Never Meant to be Ch9 and EpilogueNever Meant to be Ch9 and Epilogue by Priceless911
Zeil opened his eyes only to find himself standing in the middle of the most horrifying sight he had ever seen. Zeil looked around as he found himself standing on a hill in the middle of what was once a terrible and bloody battlefield. Far as the eye could see, was a stretch of pony, griffin, and zebra corpses that covered the landscape making it almost impossible to see the trampled and dead grass below them. And if the sight wasn’t bad enough, the reddish glow that was stretched across everything in sight from an overhead eclipse made even the grass that could be seen look as if blood had rained down from the heavens above. Seeing the stretch of dead soldiers, weapons, and blood made Zeil cover his mouth and close his eyes as he tried to remove this vision of horror from his mind. But as he tried to bear the sight, a voice came from behind him,
Never Meant to be Ch8Never Meant to be Ch8 by Priceless911
I Am Your Enemy… Right?
With a saddlebag on his back, Zeil Trotted as fast as he could down the trail. He was determined to get to Zecora’s and tell her who he was. Even if he felt a little nervous about her reaction, he knew that if he waited any longer then he had to, his chances of forgiveness would decrease. So the determined changeling continued on his path as he mumbled the words to himself, “Zecora… I love you… and I know you love me too… so I have to be completely honest with you. I need to tell you. I'm a changeling… I’ve been one this whole time, but… I was afraid that if you knew the real me, that you would reject me and cast me aside like all the other species of this world. But then… I fell in love. And I knew that the only way I could ever be happy is by staying here with you, and giving up
|Gathering of My OC Star Bolt, His Story, and a few of his Officers, plus some comics. and a few requests. enjoy|
The Cutters Part 1The Traitor of the Crystal EmpireThe Cutters Part 1 by Priceless911
The soldier stood at attention in the middle of the royal hall, with his king watching from his thorn, as his general paced around him, “Soldier! I called you here because of all the kings soldiers, you seemed to be the most loyal, trustworthy, and strong… however, that won’t stop me from asking you a series of questions to prove your loyalty… What is your name?”
The soldier replied, “My name is Major Traipse, Sir!”
the general looked at the king who watched with no expression, then the general looked back at the soldier and asked, “Is that your real name?”
“What is your real name?”
Traipse replied without hesitation, “I don’t know sir!”
The Cutters Part 2A Disturbed SerenityThe Cutters Part 2 by Priceless911
“COME QUICKLY I SEE SOMEPONY!!! GET HELP THERE ARE TWO OF THEM!!!”
Another pony from the group of travelers trotted up to the yelling pony and looked at the bodies, “No… they don’t need help… not anymore. The freezing wind was too much for them both. I guess these lovers were on their way to the town we just left, the poor souls.”
The other pony sighed, “Freezing to death in a blizzard like this… well at least they went together in each other’s arms. That’s how I would want to go if my wife and I were alone like this. Should we give them a proper burial?”
The first pony replied, “It seems like that’s the least we can do for them. It’s a shame we didn’t find them in time.”
(Prequel to Tears of a Fallen Star)
In an era of continuous war, The nation with the strongest military rules. however, the nation who hires an elite mercenary team known as The Cutters, will always win.
This team of merciless mercinaries will kill without fear, without fail, and without mercy. however they are more then what they seem.
Tears Of A Fallen Star Ch1Chapter 1Tears Of A Fallen Star Ch1 by Priceless911
The Unknown Colt
Wind… that was the first sound he heard, the young colt opened his eyes but he was too weak to move. With his eyes open, he could see many stars above him, that’s when he realized he was lying on his back. Out the corner of his eye, he could see a blue mane, he was very weak so he struggled to move his head to see who that mane belonged to, it was a tall beautiful mare.
The mare noticed that he had woken up so she smiled at him and asked “Are you ok little colt?”
The young colt could only nod his head yes, he was still too weak to talk. The mare smiled and spoke again, “Congratulations my little pony, you just earned your cutie mark. You now know your special talent.”
The young colt looked at the mark that had recently appeared on his flank, it w
Tears of a Fallen Star Ch2Chapter 2Tears of a Fallen Star Ch2 by Priceless911
The wind was calm today; hopefully it will go as planned. Star Bolt stood at the edge of a steep cliff looking into the distance. Thinking back it’s been almost five years since he first used the Lightning Orb and now that he is older, he believes fully that he can control it. His mentor and gardian Commander Mist stood behind him; “You can do it sparky, show them what your training has amounted to.”
Star Bolt looked back at Commander Mist, and nodded, then he started to focus. After a short time of concentrating, he could feel a static charge in his hooves. Then he looked up, as a small cloud formed above his head. This cloud grew larger and larger until it was about five feet across. Then Commander Mist yelled out, “It’s too big hold back!”
When Commander Mist yelled this,
(My First Story)
Follow a pony named Star Bolt as he does everything he can to save the mare he loves from the darkness in her heart.
An Ancestors Promise All the zebra gathered for this year’s Placement Trial. Each year all the young zebras who have yet to find their place in the tribe will gather for a ritual that places each one in a set of tests. Here they will find their inner most talents and earn their place amongst the tribe, not to mention their placement marks which will appear on their flank as soon as their talents are discovered. This day was the very day that the young Zecora had been waiting for her entire life. Every day she has counted down waiting for her chance to show her skills in magic, something that very few zebra of the northern tribe ever get to do.An Ancestors Promise by Priceless911
As the young zebra finished lining up, the Zebra chief trotted up to the podium and announced, “Brothers! Sisters! Both young and old! Today we are gathered here for a very sp
Under Your Muzzle I rushed as fast as I could to the location that the witness spoke of. The whole time I galloped, I was thinking to myself, “We finally got him! We finally caught Commander Bolt!Under Your Muzzle by Priceless911
As I rush up to the sight I could already see a few of my soldiers waiting for me, so I asked, “Where is he? Did you get him?”
They both shook their heads as one spoke, “Captain Armor… the neighbors say he left this morning, they said he was on his way into the Griffin Kingdoms from here. If this is true then he’s probably crossed the border by now.”
Once again, I was just plain ticked off. Princess Celestia ordered me to bring him to her weeks ago… but so far, I haven’t even seen his face yet. All I have are rumors and witness descriptions of him.
One pony from Trottingham says he is a tall buff alicorn
|(Sequel to Tears of a Fallen Star)|
Legend tells of a great soldier who was once the commander who led Nightmare Moon's Soldiers over a thousand years ago. Yet this is a collection of stories told by the ponies of Equestria who claim they have met this terrifying commander, and they all claim that he isn't so terrifying after all.
The Price of Harmony Prolougue and Ch1PrologueThe Price of Harmony Prolougue and Ch1 by Priceless911
The howling wind and the flowing water were the only sounds he could hear, and considering what he heard prior to falling unconscious… this sound terrified him. Slowly Star Bolt opened only one eye as the other was submerged in the gently flowing water around him. Looking around from where he laid, Star Bolt could tell that he was lying in the shallow river that flowed through the valley. With every bone in in his body aching from the catastrophe. Star Bolt rolled from his side onto his back. As he looked into the sky, he could see a small clearing in the surrounding dust, and through that clearing, he could see the orange colored sky that was supposed to be dusk… but he knew that it was closer to twelve o’clock midnight.
Seeing this only deepened hi
The Price of Harmony Ch2Chapter 2The Price of Harmony Ch2 by Priceless911
The Ponies of Ponyville
“Welcome to Ponyville…”
With the sun hanging overhead, Star Bolt stood looking at the welcome sign as he thought to himself, “Well this is it… I guess I should find out how to get to Sweet Apple Acres now.”
Star Bolt began trotting past the sign and into the town. As he continued down the road, he looked ahead at the town and smiled, “Looks peaceful… not very big, but very homely. I hope I can stay here for a whi…”
all of a sudden, a mysterious pink flash flew out of the town, passed Star Bolt and vanished somewhere down the road. Star Bolt turned and looked behind him, but after he didn’t see anything he mumbled, “What… that was that?... hmm… just my imagination I guess. Maybe I should find an inn and get some sleep, it’s almost noon now and I h
|(Sequel to Tears of a Fallen Star & The Wandering Star)|
Star Bolt has spent 2 years trying to live his life as a wanderer, but when chaos breaks out in Canterlot, he decides to return for one last fight... however, this isn't a battle against an army... but a demon.
The Price of Harmony: Fire and Lightning Ch2Chapter 2:The Price of Harmony: Fire and Lightning Ch2 by Omega-Wing
Soldier vs Ghost
"So, I met you before huh?"
Starlight faced the ground as Spitfire continued to give him a friendly look. He looked away as she leaned forward slightly to get a better look at his face. "Y-Yeah. It...it was during t-that accident involving the...the collapsing structure in Manehattan a good few years ago."
Spitfire's eyes lit up as she realised what he was talking about. "Yeah! I remember that!"
Managing a slight smile, Starlight said, "I...I'm sure you would. You saved me when I...when I was falling, but...y-you probably wouldn't remember that, I-I...I was just a colt at the time."
Raising a brow at his words, Spitfire took a moment to remember the accident again. Remembering everything after a short minute of thinking, she turned to Starlight and smiled at him again as she put a forehoof on his shoulder. "Of course I remember. The little red colt. I told ya to hold on tight while I flew us out of there."
The Price of Harmony: Fire and LightningPrologueThe Price of Harmony: Fire and Lightning by Omega-Wing
It had been one week ever since Star Bolt and the others returned to Equestria. All of the Ponies and Griffins started working together to rebuild the towns and cities that were destroyed by the Dark Alicorn, the Griffin Kingdom itself was doing fine on its own in reconstruction its cities. With the threat of the Dark Alicorn finally over, everything was finally peaceful again. The main focus of the Princesses was fixing all of the damage that was done and Canterlot was one of the first structures and cities to start rebuilding. Thankfully, everypony who was with Star Bolt during the last battle against the Dark Alicorn was present and willing to help in any way they could.
Shining Armor and the Royal Guards, both Celestial and Lunar, were moving rubble while others used their magic to try and fix the damage that was done to the mountain. The Wonderbolts, led by Spitfire, assisted with this along with Gilda and her Griffins troops, while Twilight Sparkle and
|Commitions, requests, art trades, and even some inspired art from verious diffrent artist from all corners of DA. Thanks to all!|
|Though I am a good writer in the since that I had no training what so ever... I'm a lousy artist and I would like any and all readers who interested to help me better portray my OC's and their lives through art. I'm not asking for anything free, since I know its rude to merely assume any one would do something like this for a complete stranger. but if they feel like they can truly grasp the scene I'm placing through my writing then feel free to let me know and if you would rather do it through commitions then send me examples of your art and or prices and we can strike up a deal. but if the writing is enough to inspire free art (unlikely) then feel free to tackle it and let me know. any art that is free I wont turn away, but I'm afraid I may turn down commitions if the style isn't to my liking or if the prices seem too high.|
Special thanks to those who have helped so far.
Tears of a Fallen Star
:thumb312739793: Chapter 10
The Kings War
The Wondering Star
When Bolts Cross
The Price of Harmony
The name is Shawn, I'm a soldier in the US army who specializes in military weaponry operations and repair, you could call me an armorer if you want but I'm on a completely different level than your run-of the-mill armorer. On my free time I write about my OC Ponies life or I make images using Photoshop and whatever else I can get my hands on. (Yes I'm a brony and I'm proud of it.)
When I'm not writing or photo shopping images I study military history, firearm history, I'll go to the shooting range, play paintball, watch anime, or play videogames. (yes I'm a nerd but I like to think of myself as an alternative nerd, because not many nerds like, own, and shoot high powered weaponry or play paintball just for the thrill.)
I AM an artist, but I'm not the kind or artist that can draw or paint... I write, I'm not the best writer but I can think up any type of story you can Imagine , Action, romance, comedy, even emotional (which happens to be my strong suit). I also love music the perfect song can make any image a master piece.
I just added myself to FIMFiction.net www.fimfiction.net/user/Pricel…
If it’s not here, it won’t be there, I prefer deviant art to this so any posts I do will be placed here first!!!
I also play Pokémon tough I prefer he second gen era, but here is my team in order from fave to least fave:
Tears of a Fallen Star
Chapter 1: The Unknown Colt
Chapter 2: The Exam
Chapter 3:Commander Bolt’s Decision
Chapter 4: The Friendly Foe and the Eclipsed Nightmare
Chapter 5: Two Orphans, Celestia, And New Recruits
Chapter 6: Celestia's Stand, and Forgotten Foes
Chapter 7: Peace in Death, Love in War, And Good in Evil
Chapter 8: Confrontations between Nations
Chapter 9: The Bolt That Cleared the Mist
Chapter 10: The Fatal Funnel
Chapter 11: Wounded Spiritually, Physically, and Emotionally
Chapter 12: A Murder In Cloudsdale’s Shadow
Chapter 13: Past Wounds in Present Skies
Chapter 14: Who I Am
Chapter 15: My Home Front
Chapter 16: The Emotions of War
Chapter 17: True Pain
Chapter 18: Letter From a Mare in Love
Chapter 19: A Meeting to End the War
Chapter 20: By the Light of the Stars
Chapter 21: The Fallen Star
Chapter 22: A New Dawn
The Kings War
Chapter 1 A Message From the King
Chapter 2 Crossing the Border
Chapter 3 "Someday Soon"
Chapter 4 Capital City Gryphus
Chapter 5 The Mare in Red
Chapter 6 "Check"
Chapter 7 The Second Encounter
Chapter 8 The First Taste of Battle
Chapter 9 Familiarized Eyes
Chapter 10 "Talk"
Chapter 11 Discovering the Truth
Chapter 12 The City that has Never Fallen
Chapter 13 The Final Defense
Chapter 14 The Last of Us
Chapter 15 Enemies and Allies
Chapter 16 At War's End
Part 1 Traitor to the Crystal Empire
Part 2 A Disturbed Serenity
Part 3 Noble Blood
Part 4 When Legends Clash
Part 5 The Tome of Eden
Part 6 Eden's Secret (Part 1)
Part 7 Eden's Secret (Part 2)
Part 8 The Life We Live
Part 9 Motherhood
Part 10 The Sinner and the Star
Part 11 Together in Tartarus
A Charred Stone
Chapter 1: The Lonely Shade of White
Chapter 2: My Friends...
Chapter 3: The Commander
Chapter 4: Cadet Stone
Chapter 5: Hidden Talents
Chapter 6: Fear, Joy, then Nothing
The Wandering Star
An Ancestors Promise
Diary of a Rose of Luck
Memories of a Princess in Pain
Legacy of the Rich
When Bolts Cross
Under Your Muzzle
My Hero's Hero
The Price of Harmony
Chapter 1: The Cloaked Stallion
Chapter 2: The Ponies of Ponyville
Chapter 3: The Keepers of the Elements
Chapter 4: Old Friends, and New Storms
Chapter 5: Truth and Lies
Chapter 6: Letter From a Princess
Chapter 7: Gathering Resources
Chapter 8: Closure
Chapter 9: Judges, Jury, Executioners
Chapter 10: Commander and the Prince
Chapter 11: Gathering Help
Chapter 12: The Last City of the Alicorn Race
Chapter 13: Tis Time...
Chapter 14: Reconciliation
Chapter 15: Discord...
Chapter 16: Canterlot's Genocide
Chapter 17: The Fall of Canterlot
Chapter 18: Aftermath
Chapter 19: The Ruins of Gryphus
Chapter 20: The Battle of Eden
Chapter 21: Director?... Wingmare?... Captain?...
Chapter 22: Teacher?... Prince?... Dreams!
Chapter 23: Eden's End
Chapter 24: Osiris's Sacrifice
Chapter 25: The Queen of Eden
Chapter 26: The Price of Harmony
Chapter 1: Test Flight
Chapter 2: The Life Debt
Chapter 3: Detour
Chapter 4: The Clan, the Commander, and the Cu…
Chapter 5: A Sibling’s Cruelty
Chapter 6: “I love you… Good Bye…”
Chapter 7: Melody of an Ex
Chapter 8: Propulsion
Chapter 9: Conversing with Death Herself
Chapter 10: Derpy’s Tears
Chapter 11: A Murder Most Foul
Chapter 12: The Cutters' Haven
Chapter 13: Sons and Doughters
Chapter 14: The K-7 Limitless
Chapter 15: The Hostile Takeover
Chapter 16: The Stage is Set
Chapter 17: Crash of the K-7 Limitless
Chapter 18: Allen's Final Mission
Never Meant to Be
Chapter 1: I Am Wounded
Chapter 2: I Am Intrigued
Chapter 3: I Am Conflicted
Chapter 4: I Am A Student
Chapter 5: I Am Judged…
Chapter 6: I Am an Enchanter
Chapter 7: I Am In Love
Chapter 8: I Am Your Enemy… Right?
Chapter 9: I... Was...